It's a funny story, but perhaps a more long, over-complicated story would've fit better. It was a little humourous with the metal music behind, but because it was plagued with brevity, it really didn't make the cut the quality deserves. Other then that, the switching from scene to scene didn't seem to mix very well. Perhaps if you touched it up, made it longer and fleshed out the story a bit more, it would be a fun watch.
Nice! The only complaint out of me is that you didn't make -more- of what you're doing-- I really do consider you making more, then I would give much more stars. Keep it up homes!
Thanks. And make more i am doing. Watch this space. =]
I really think this'll help some people-- Even though clocks in most Flash games aren't used, some are solely based on them (Games that have time limits, atleast). I hope you come out with some more tutorials that help out with more things-- But my advice is to have several things in one big tutorial. Keep it up. And when I pressed on this, I thought I was going to learn about the cl0ck animation. All well. :P
Yeah, time limits are the reason for the tutorial. Also, when you say clock animation, do you mean analog clock with hands going round it?
I, in all my Flash Clock mastery, have got one of those, too. But that's worse than this one........
i love how its like you bolth are actualy useing your thoughts good game
Nice! I love when people tell about NG through flash-videos (rules, history, etc) it really makes me think that. . .Someone has a clue to what this crazy websites organizational systems work? I can finally use my whistle now, that's been lying on the couch, and staring at me as I gone through my profile. . .Thanks! Keep it up.
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Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad that I was able to clarify a few grey areas. Good luck with your whistle!
I don't see how this was the -ultimate-. Usually, an ultimate quiz would be a very long one, with all the questions from the other quiz along with some bonus questions. Although, I did enjoy the scoring system. I just wish you had a bit more before calling it the 'ultimate' anything. Other then that, the questions were a bit hard, and unlike some -other- reviewers I will not point out (Like, KrinkelsForever) it helps to have grammer, but it's not all too essential. Keep it up.
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Man, I've been listening to your older tunes for so long. . .When I came back, I had to check you out. Thanks man! This stuff is professional. . .Guess the market isn't exactly in your favor though, eh? I liked this piece, it's a good showing of your darker side. . .You've always had a subtle mystery about your music (as fun and playful as it is, there's always a tingle of malicious intentions!) so it's nice to see you really flesh out that feeling. And you do a great represenation:
"You're a scary paradise" for example-- you just mix the good in the bad right in the pot and bam-- add some VitranDango, keep your 80s voice, we got a great song produced, cut and sent. Thanks man! Don't stop the flow, and if you get a record deal or something, hit me up!
Haha! Hey Sour Puddle, its been awhile! Thanks again too, I appreciate that!
Yeah, I don't think the market will ever be in my favor, haha! I think my market missed me by 30 years, haha! Even modern acts that have a vibe this similar usually have better success in Europe. Hopefully I can develop a live act one of these days.
Yeah, these lyrics are quite dark compared to most of what I do. When building the song, it started to sound deep and dark, so I just drew upon a bad relationship and it kindof fell into place. Its about misplaced sympathy, being drawn into by someone just to fulfill their own wicked needs.
I'm glad you dug the song SourPuddle, I'm kindof proud of this one, so I'm glad you dug it too.
Your bass lowering all other sounds would be because the soundwaves are just that fricken big, that they're blocking out all the other sounds. The beat is good when it's consistent on four-on-the-floor (1-2-3-4-). The bass is really nice and deep, but don't over indulge the listener in it. I noticed the filter changes, too, the hi-hat sounds killer!
how would i fix so said prob? i mean it fixes it if i turn it down to the point i cant hear it.
i dont get what you mean when you says four on the floor?
are you talking bout he part thats after the intro where the kicks are at every 4 and everything unlike near the ending where the kicks fallow the pattern more so thin timeing? cos that was me trying something new.
the hi hat is vary simple lol all i did was 1 had the panning go from l to r
and at the slow parts i turned on reverb!
also there where not many filter changes at all to notice XD
bass over all turned really good to me i maid them to lison with my sub and i tryed not makeing them to noticeable so they wouldent be distracting
i put alot of work in on this song and i know im not done
The notes were fine, but the drums sound like their on steroids. Get a simpler beat in there and don't change it so often. The fills are fine, but you don't want to change your snares pattern too much. It may even be good without percussion. I liked all the melody, but perhaps the bass could be a little more definitive.
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