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Niice.

I think it was very well done-- Unfortunatly, at some points you ended the note too fast, making it a bit choppy, and I couldn't figure when the song was starting or ending (Good thing.). My only suggestion is that you make a bit more variety of different notes but it was good.
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._. Vroom!

I liked the whole song-- it all seemed like a big solo-- I liked the stopping part and played a bit more softer-- overall, it felt really crazy most of the time. . .But not. Since the thing there says 'General Rock'. Haha. But I wouldn't consider calling it Metal unless you tuned it just a bit. The drums got a bit repetitive-- Fills through toms atleast twice would be awesome.
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Niiice!

As a drummer myself, I could barely figure out that those drums weren't real. If you really want some advice-- Drumming is all beat and fill. You just drum to the tempo of the song, and fills have to come back in exactly at the time of the tempo-- Which you did well and correctly. I liked your guitar skills, especially the solo. The only note on the vocals are; Not to be an ass, but from what I hear, your voice doesn't exactly match the song. Try getting a friend to do a deeper voice with more bass-- You kinda sound like Bill Cosby, but whiter. The best way to improve it is to make it bass-ish and deep, or high pitched and screamy. Your yelling isn't long enough; it says 'YEAAGRGHHHGH!" but I hear "AARG." try longer and put your vocals a bit louder then everything else for that moment. But with all honesty, great job homie.
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Woo.

It's a nice sort-of powerful techno-ish sound, repetitive at first and then diving into the trench of break, slowly, jaggedly moving its way back to the fast techno. I didn't see what was so wrong with the intro, except maybe it dived in too fast-- But that's fine, usually some people just start as if the song was already going, so don't worry too much-- Just milk what you were doin' when you tried to start off the intro. Of course, the Bass basically leaded the rest through, thankfully. Some people forget what the Bass is for-- To guide it through the music. I liked it a lot, the beat was nice, and I also enjoyed the breaks mixed into the faster techno. Can't wait for more, homes.
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I never thought there -was- a African Magneto. . .

No soup for you. I'm a Metal artist myself-- Drummer actually-- and I gotta say, at the start of this song I thought after the double bass kicked in, there would be a crazy ass song rumbling through my little world. I was a bit wrong. If there was a guitar, turn it up! Really man. Half the time I only heard was that repetitive re-do of voice. What kinda 'Death Metal' do you even listen to? This didn't sound like it at all. Try amping the guitar and have the drum do a beat, so the bass can lead the rest through the apocolyptic storm called Death Metal, then you may have your soup.

KlanMaster911 responds:

Listen to the right channel and you will hear the guitars.

But yeah..All I do is repeat the same riff over and over.I either tremelo pick it our play it with chords.

Storms never felt so energetic. *Zapp.* Nevermind.

Sounded really cool. Like. . .Amped, more awesome elevator music. Except you can dance to it. Did I mention it's more awesome? Anyway, it did get pretty repetitive but I could definately see it more of a loop. It was a bit too energetic to be called 'storm' because half the time I was thinking of a sun. But that's doesn't matter, you did really well on making the song-- And I heard a bit of the thunder in the backround. Keep up yer gud wark.

Crazy.

._. Holy crap! This music becomes pretty intense after a while. I was listening to it, slowly as it started and then the whole thing freaked out. You had a ton of old instruments mixed with whatnot and it came out. . .Freakishly awesome, may I say? Keep it up, homie.

SymbolCymbal responds:

thanx for the awesome review...
this was an extremely fun to song to create ,, we are making another one soon
im really glad you digged on the song

Neat. . .

I liked how the start began pretty slow, and then turned into a phycho of a dance party. The bass (drum) parts were pretty cool-- Powerful. The high-hat mixed in with the synth keyboard sounded really cool. I also liked the last part-- Very slow and unique. Can't wait to hear more.

jxl180 responds:

So, why the seven? lol just kidding. Thank you for your review.

You have any violin notes for this I can practice?

You certainly do have a talent for music. And I'm not being sarcastic-- This stuff was pretty powerful. It seemed like you mixed Synth, a bit of bass, and. . .Violin's? It seemed as if one violin was plucking once in a while, and the other was playing to the jagged rhythm of the song-- And sounded pretty good. Bravo, can't wait to hear more.

DrDIL responds:

Thanks.

No, there are no violins in this song. Every instrument is a synth, no romplers with acoustic sounds or synthesized acoustic ones. Perhaps you mean the high stabs that accompany the arps that kick in at the beginning? I guess I can send you midis of this.

By the way, I can't even read sheet music :P

Why stop this song, why not love me?

Because I'm a dork. . . Did I really just answer that? Anyway; There really isn't any reason to stop this song, seeing how the guitar's, drums and vocals are greatly used, along with the other affects. The vocals and guitar mixed perfectly at some points where they were expected to-- And fortunately, it happened. The drums were almost professional as the guitars, if I may say.

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