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THIS IS BLASPHEMY

How dare you taint the word "music" with this disguisting rabble, implimented with a grimy, simple four/four beat that has left our communities without a moral perspective on music-- thus destroying the art of music as a whole! The crude and primitive lyrics followed by a overpowering bassline had not made it better, and the treble was simply horrible and without real melody and progression!

Not really, of course; although music is (obviously) not usually with humour, when humour is implimented, it actually yields good results for professionals, but not so much with amatuers. Though people don't understand that most humour oriented music isn't exactly based upon the instruments. This is beside the point; the song was actually pretty impressive with the synths, and even if the bassline was used beforehand, it matched with the song and fit nicely. The vocals were actually impressive; I also liked the british accent, though correct me if I'm wrong. Another thing with the vocals were that they were on time; it's actually pretty hard to mash a bit of those letters in a small amount of time while still sounding good. Though, I must admit, the lyrics were a bit suggestive, I tend to ignore the specific vocals and soak in the cock-jokiness that repeats almost in an unending circle. Don't let getting top five dissuade you from continuing your music "career" here on Newgrounds, homes!

Archealor responds:

kthxbai

"The real music in Newgrounds is low in scores"

I guess that set of mind is right. This is good stuff, man, maybe a little slow, but sluggin' along groovin' never gets better, you know? It seems to be missing something, but I can't put my finger on it; I think the vocals could be put a little louder, and there could be a small bass solo somewhere, or atleast a change in the bassline (Perhaps bG E). But I'm happy to see more acoustic peices on Newgrounds.

Lukania responds:

Actually it was a jam session, we left the mic on, at first we were just joking around, they are the lyrics to Sly's 'Thank You (Falletinme Bee Mice Elf)'.

AAHH! MY EARS ARE BURNING!

Well, this indicates a sure sign that it IS happy gabber. I like it, but there seems to be a problem with your rudiments once and a while, and sometimes when there's triplets, I want six tuplets. The only real thing missing here is the pop voice at chipmunk pitch, which most of us don't want anyway. Don't stop making happy gabber!

I like it!

This was really cool. It really did capture the sad feeling. This is really awesome! Keep up the good work man, I like it. Sometimes that white noise in the back comes up too much or two loudly, but I don't think you can control that specifically.

Damn Australians make the best music.

Though some vocal is needed, I actually wanted to hear her get up an octave once and a while. The piano sounded professional, and I liked the bass, but the drummer sounded like he needed a better kit; otherwise, it was really impressive for a pop band. Keep it up! To be honest, it's a hundred times better then the pop played in America.

Yeah, I like using VEC1/2 samples too.

It was really good, but I think the percussion needs to be fixed minorly. The melodies were great, though.

It was okay.

It was really nice, but it felt like it needed some progression. It felt like it was the same thing over again, but I know it wasn't. With the volume variations, I think you need to work more on working up, because it feels too much like it's quiet and soft, but still quick, and then it's in your face instantly. My last complaint is with the bass notes; you hit four or five keys at one time and it didn't really sound that good.

Otherwise, it was really good, man. Keep it up!

lvl5drummer responds:

thanks dude! yeah chords are a little tricky for me so i'm working on those. and i'm actually trying to teach myself to play my songs so i can make sense and improve them. but thanks for the review!

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I liked it

This songs pretty cool, and well composed, but at 1:32 you need to learn to change from the higher notes to the lower ones faster, because they're a little longer, it make it seem a bit too repetitive. The transition near the end could've been less abrupt, although I'm over-exagerating that a bit. Also, I'm going to go with Le-Guardia here, and I'm going to say where the bass beats were hitting three times, add a soft open high hat or something, but you should experiment with what sounds best.

lidlurch responds:

what do you mean by that? should i make the bass faster or less faster? i'll see what i can do about the drumbeat, though i kind of like it. i'll see what i can do with the transition at the end as well. all of these are pretty easy fixes, thanks for the review!

Good job, man.

Man, this is great. Can't find stuff like this anymore, man, right? I wish you made it a bit longer, man, that would be awesome. I like the lyrics about regret and the general beat and synth behind; it worked pretty well, man.

Keep it up, bro.

Murdaa responds:

yeah.. i was goin for a real ooold school feel.. like u would hear in freestyle music.. and let it ride with a old school hip hop feel aswell.

Neat.

The trumpet was a little abrupt, I think if you added some bass/snare you would prepare the listener for a louder sound. Some of the trumpet notes didn't sound very good next to eachother, but it was nice. Keep it up, man.

Tassadoul responds:

Glad you liked it. ^^
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